How to Use 16-Mark Model Essays to Improve AQA Psychology Grades Fast
Introduction
Model essays — A* 16-marker answers — are power tools, but only if you use them the right way.
Reading an A* essay doesn’t automatically give you an A; you must dissect it, understand the marks it earns, and practise writing your own version.
This guide shows you exactly how to turn model answers into real exam-grade improvements — using your free Cognitive vs Psychodynamic essay as an example.
Step 1: Read the Model Answer Actively (Not Passively)
Instead of just reading, do this:
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Highlight AO1 definitions / assumptions
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Underline every link-back phrase to the question
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Mark every study used as evidence
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Tick every PBWC paragraph (Point, Because, Why, Counterargument)
By doing this, you build a mental map of how an A* answer is structured.
Free A* Essay — Cognitive vs Psychodynamic
Step 2: Compare to the Mark Scheme
After reading, grab the mark scheme and see:
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Which AO1 and AO3 points get credit?
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Did the essay include everything the mark scheme demands?
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Where is the “Level 4 AO3” language?
This sharpens your awareness of what examiners actually reward — not just what looks “good.”
Step 3: Rewrite the Essay in Your Own Words
Close the PDF. On a fresh page (preferably your notebook), rewrite the essay without looking — using only your memory and understanding.
This builds memory retention, exam muscle, and confidence.
Step 4: Write ONE Original Essay on a Similar Question
Now pick a different 16-marker — maybe another comparison question (e.g. Cognitive vs Behaviourist, or Psychodynamic vs Biological).
Apply the same structure you learned. This helps you generalise the skill, not just copy the answer.
Step 5: Track Your Progress and Spot Weaknesses
Use your tracker sheet to note:
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Which questions you attempt
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What marks you get (self-assessed or peer marked)
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Which sections need improvement (AO1/AO3/structure/timing)
Over time, you’ll see real improvement.
Step 6: Practise Regularly — Spaced & Smart
Don’t cram.
Do 1–2 essays per week max.
Alternate between:
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Reading model answers
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Rewriting them
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Writing original essays
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Reviewing weaknesses
This rhythm builds mastery without burnout.
Why This Method Works Better Than Re-reading Notes
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Forces active recall, which strengthens memory
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Speeds up essay planning under timed conditions
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Promotes deeper understanding (not surface memorisation)
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Builds exam-ready writing habits
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Helps you internalise structures (hook, PBWC, link-back)
Use Your Tools for Maximum Effect
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Notebook (topic-specific or general) — to rewrite and practise
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Revision map / summary sheets — for quick refreshers
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Tracker sheet — to monitor growth
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Past Papers Hub — for fresh questions
👉 AQA Psychology Past Papers Hub
Conclusion
Model essays aren’t magic — but when used correctly, they’re the closest thing to a cheat code for 16-mark questions.
By studying, deconstructing, rewiring, and practising, you can turn a free essay into your own exam-ready answer — and turn a B into an A*.
Stick with the method. Stay consistent. You’ll see the results.